In the morning we started packing. When we finished packing it took half an hour to put the suitcases into the car. We got on the road. Finally, we are on the way to the airport. Half way to the airport the tire went flat and there was no fuel in the car. We had spare fuel and we had a spare tire in the boot with the suitcases. We had to take out all the suitcases so we could get the tyre out from under the boot floor. It took ages to get all the suitcases out, and back in again!When we got to the airport we had to pay a lot of money for the plane tickets. Then we got into the plane. It took ages on the plane to get to Australia. I played Angry Birds and Jetpack Joyride on my mum's phone. The time went fast.
I choose this piece to publish because... It was my best piece that I did.
I need to practice... because i didn't do much
I am pleased about...my writing because it was long.